Oh, this was so lovely and sweet! I loveloveloved the dialogue and how you write them so well together. And the end! Not only have you discovered my love for AU's, but also for awkward first kiss scenes! Really lovely <3.
I am totally taking my time with mine because I have never written these two before, but I kind of like how it's going right now
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on 2009-08-04 03:20 pm (UTC)Oh, this was so lovely and sweet! I loveloveloved the dialogue and how you write them so well together. And the end! Not only have you discovered my love for AU's, but also for awkward first kiss scenes! Really lovely <3.
I am totally taking my time with mine because I have never written these two before, but I kind of like how it's going right now