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Title: Fiercely
Rating: PG, maybe slight PG-13, IDK.
Word Count: 800
Warnings: mention of blood/injuries, boy kissing
Characters: Ukitake, Renji, Ichigo, Unohana, Shunsui
Pairings: Renji/Ichigo, Ukitake/Shunsui
Notes: THIS IS FOR [livejournal.com profile] cmc42! I'm sorry I can't write fluff, this is the best I could do. <3333333333



Ukitake stirs, blinking sleep out of his eyes as a commotion outside the room wakes him. It sounds like Abarai-fukutaichou’s voice.

His suspicion is confirmed a few seconds later when the door bursts open and Abarai appears, carrying Kurosaki in his arms. Ukitake sits up, the concern in his eyes increasing as he sees Unohana behind them.

Abarai strides quickly over to the other bed and carefully places his friend down. Unohana moves to the other side of the bed and leans over the unconscious boy. Ukitake can see her hand glowing as she murmurs soft kido spells. Abarai’s brow is furrowed in worry as he gazes down at Kurosaki.

Ukitake wonders what happened. Another person down? That’s not good… especially one as strong as Kurosaki.

But then Unohana straightens up. “He’ll be all right in no time. He just overstrained himself.” She reports calmly.

Abarai’s eyes fill with relief, though he crosses his arms and scowls. “The idiot.”

Unohana smiles. “Call me if anything unexpected happens; I’ll be down the hall tending to the other wounded.” Abarai nods, his eyes on Kurosaki. “Is this okay with you, Ukitake-taichou?” His old friend asks, turning towards him.

Ukitake nods. “Of course.” He knows there isn’t much room elsewhere. Unohana smiles in thanks and rapidly leaves the room.

Abarai looks up in surprise, just now noticing Ukitake’s presence. He flushes in embarrassment. “U-Ukitake-taichou!”

The taichou waves a hand at him. “’s fine. Really.” He smiles and settles back against the pillows.

Abarai is about to make a response when Kurosaki stirs. “R-Renji?” He croaks.

“Hey, yah idiot.” Abarai huffs, glaring down at him.

“W-where?…”

“Yer in fourth division, you stubborn ass. You got yerself wounded.”

Kurosaki makes a dismissive sound and begins to try to get up, and Abarai make a strange squawking noise. “What’re yah doing?!” He unfolds his arms and pushes the injured man back down.

“Hey!!” Kurosaki protests, but Renji growls at him. “I’m fine!”

“Like hell yah are!” Renji snarls. “That bastard almost killed yah!” Then the tension drains abruptly out of his frame. “… he almost killed yah.” He repeats, slumping over and resting his head on Kurosaki’s shoulder. Kurosaki freezes in surprise, and then tentatively brings up an arm to rest on Abarai’s back.

They stay there, frozen and silent, and Ukitake looks away, knowing he’s intruding on a private moment. He tries to go back to sleep, feeling his own wound ache.

-

It is night when Shunsui appears noiselessly in the room. Ukitake opens his eyes and smiles at him. Shunsui sits heavily down on the edge of his bed, and Ukitake studies him. Exhaustion is in his shoulders, and there are smudges of dirt and blood on his skin and clothes.

“Hey.” Ukitake says softly, and Shunsui smiles wearily at him.

“You okay?” He asks, placing a hand in Ukitake’s hair.

Ukitake leans into the touch and murmurs, “Yes. I’m recovering well. My illness has cooperated as well.”

Shunsui’s smile becomes more real. “Good. That’s very good.” Ukitake hums in agreement.

They sit there in silence for a couple minutes, each lost in their own thoughts. When Ukitake looks up again, he sees that his lover is staring across the room at the other bed. He follows Shunsui’s gaze, and sees that the two are curled together on the bed, Abarai’s arm slung protectively over Kurosaki’s shoulder. Ukitake feels himself smiling. “Those two are cute.” He comments softly.

Shunsui grins lopsidedly at him. “I suppose so.”

Ukitake’s eyes are almost wistful. “They’re so young… they have so much life in them. They love… they love so fiercely. I can almost feel it.” It makes him feel old.

As Shunsui smiles fondly down at him, he realizes it also makes him miss Shunsui. They’ve both been too busy with the war lately; they’ve barely had time to talk, let alone… His eyes sharpen and he reaches out and grabs the front of Shunsui’s haori, jerking him down for a kiss. Shunsui makes a surprised noise, but quickly leans gratefully, eagerly into the kiss.

When they break away, both gasping for air, Ukitake wishes that he were not sharing a room. He’d like some privacy at the moment. He glances over at the two boys again, and then smiles tentatively up at Shunsui. “I know you probably have stuff to do back at the division, but… you look exhausted. Stay?” He pleads, shifting over. Shunsui immediately slumps down into the open space, wrapping his arms around Ukitake.

“Of course.” He murmurs into Ukitake’s white hair, and Ukitake leans into him, reveling in his warmth. He reaches up and tangles his hands in Shunsui’s curly hair. They kiss again, slowly, lingeringly. They separate very reluctantly, and Ukitake smiles against Shunsui’s lips.

We’ll win this war yet.

on 2009-08-12 01:17 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] cmc42.livejournal.com
*wibbles*

<33333

on 2009-08-12 01:51 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
Oh dear, it is wibble inducing, isn't it? Crap. *emo* I wish I was able to write fluff on command. D: I hope you liked it anyway.

<33333333333333

on 2009-11-30 01:44 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] cmc42.livejournal.com
Damn what is it with me and my *wibbles* resonses to your fanfics? O_O

Of course I liked it silly! <3

on 2009-08-12 01:35 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] bundamba.livejournal.com
I love it!!
So well written, the imagery was brilliant.

on 2009-08-12 01:51 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! :D

on 2009-08-12 01:37 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] spikykun.livejournal.com
NNGH. I approve so heartily of this, you have no idea. RenIchi are very IC, and this: He follows Shunsui’s gaze, and sees that the two are curled together on the bed, Abarai’s arm slung protectively over Kurosaki’s shoulder. - nngh, they're CUDDLING IN A HOSPITAL BED and the "protectively" there made me squee so hard. Of course, the ShunUki caused that too :D

And also: FIERCE!

on 2009-08-12 01:55 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
*pokes* What're you doing up, you? xD

But, whew, glad you think they're IC! ^_^;; Maybe I'm getting the hang of them, slowly. xD

I'm so glad you liked the protective cuddling! That was actually the first image that came to my mind. Them cuddling and Ukitake wanting his own cuddles, heh. xD I made you squee, yay!

I didn't think of our 'fierce' conversation when Ukitake makes the 'fierce' comment. *shifty eyes*

on 2009-08-12 03:05 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] cruelest-month.livejournal.com
Awww this was so wonderful and sweet. I love the differences between the older Captains and the other two in terms of their reactions to what's going on.

on 2009-08-15 08:01 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
Thanks very much! I'm glad that came across well! :D

on 2009-08-12 06:49 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] laifan.livejournal.com
Aaaaaw! So cuuuuute! ♥

on 2009-08-15 08:06 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
Thanks! :D

on 2009-08-12 10:40 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] babyluw.livejournal.com
yay....so, cute!

ah, there's something about hospitals in fiction - they're always so full of love <3

on 2009-08-15 08:25 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
Thanks! :D

Ahhh, yus, they are. It's always where characters realize their True Feelings! And the stoic characters get Worried! xD It's fun.

on 2009-08-12 12:29 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] gokuma.livejournal.com
Awwwww..! ^__________^ I love the way you showed differences and similiraties between both pairs. And I really like Renji/Ichigo here (I adore ShunUki, of course - but it's nothing new, I like your style of writing and the captains are my OTP): it's definitely too rare pairing. I know that for the most of fandom Renji "belongs" to Byakuya (and I get it, I like this pairing too), but the dynamics between Abarai and Ichigo is also interesting and they would make a cute (although probably very quarrelsome ^^') pair.

on 2009-08-15 08:37 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
You're the second person to comment on the difference between the two pairs; I'm really glad that came across well! :D

And I agree with you completely. :) I like ByaRen too, but a some of my friends have gotten me interested in IchiRen too. I was surprised to find that it wasn't that popular of a pairing...

on 2009-08-15 08:55 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] gokuma.livejournal.com
And I love this moment when Renji says “… he almost killed yah.” I'd love to see this fic as a doujin (or at least - this scene as a picture <3).

on 2009-08-15 09:03 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
*beams* Thanks! I'm glad you liked that part too, that was one of my favorites. I can just picture it in my head. Glad you think so too! :D

on 2009-08-12 02:01 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] pony-rocks.livejournal.com
Wheee! That's so wonderful and sweet! XD

on 2009-08-15 08:34 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
*grins* Thanks! :D

on 2009-08-12 09:16 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] sayu-chan.livejournal.com
What do you mean you can't write fluff? I find this exceptionally fluffy! So cute! I am all warm and fuzzy inside now. The whole atmosphere with a war going on but those four finding some minutes for each other. Lovely!

on 2009-08-15 08:39 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
I wasn't quite sure if this qualified as fluff or not. ^_^ Considering people were injured. But I'm really really glad it gave warm fuzzy feelings! That's what I was going for! Thanks so much!!

on 2009-08-13 01:20 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] writerx75.livejournal.com
I thought it was kind of fluffy, too. I liked seeing how you wrote the two pairs of them and how the scenes compared and contrasted. And, yes, I think Renji and Ichigo would look pretty cute sleeping in that hospital bed, too. ; )

on 2009-08-15 08:42 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
Yay, I'm glad some of the fluff came through. :) I'm really glad the comparison came through too! That's what I was going for. :) They're very different pairs, but similar in all the ways that really matter. Love :). And hehe, I think it's a cute mental image too. ;) Just because sleeping is the only time you'd catch it, haha.

on 2009-08-13 06:29 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] bluecrazed.livejournal.com
awwww. i read EVERY fic u post and each one fills me with utter joy :D

and now i've actually got quite an infatuation with Ichigo/Renji now....u make them so cute :DDDD

I'm anxiously awaiting ur next fic!! :D

on 2009-08-15 08:44 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
Oh wow, thanks! I'm flattered! :D

Haha, glad you're enjoying my IchiRen too! They can definitely be cute, hehe. Just don't tell them that! ;)

I'm working on a couple different things at the moment, hopefully I'll be able to get some of them up soon! THANKS! <33

on 2009-08-13 11:25 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] decayingmoon.livejournal.com
Who is it that can't write fluff? This is heart-warming fluff, I loved how you described the two different couples, and the "fierce" made my little heart flip, even if I'm not a great fan of the pairing.

<33

on 2009-08-15 08:52 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
Whee, yay! I'm glad some of the fluff came through. :) Hehe, I'm glad you liked the 'fierce' too. If IchiRen is anything, it's fierce. xD

<33333 Thanks! :D

on 2009-08-13 05:38 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] kateison.livejournal.com
Oh, oh man. You tell me you can't write fluff and then I get this. STFU, this was fantastic.

You characterisations. They are lovely, and the hospital bed cuddling was such a great image~

on 2009-08-15 08:55 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
F-fantastic? *blushes* Thanks! <3 I'm glad the fluff came through. I was attempting to cheer someone/people up, and I'm glad it wasn't totally fail. xD

Thanks! Characterization is always one thing I'm really concerned about, especially with Ichigo and Renji. ^_^;; I'm really glad you think they were good. *bounces* I'm glad you liked the hospital bed image, it seems to be a popular one, hehe. :D

on 2009-08-14 04:53 am (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] fashi0n-mistake.livejournal.com
Aw raven this was adorable! The Ichigo/Renji part was very sweet (and bad Ichigo for worrying Renji so) but I loved the Shunsui and Jyuushirou part the best!

(Pretend you're surprised here *g*)

When they break away, both gasping for air, Ukitake wishes that he were not sharing a room.

I'm with Jyuu here-I wish they had a private room too!

on 2009-08-14 12:27 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] gokuma.livejournal.com
I wonder what Unohana will say when she'll see the boys in the morning :D

on 2009-08-17 12:54 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
Thanks! :D And haha, don't worry, the UkiShun was my favorite part, too. xD Obviously. *pretends to be surprised*

Lol, maybe someday! xD SOMEDAY I WILL WRITE PORN. SOMEDAY.

on 2009-08-16 08:56 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] kohaku-shuurai.livejournal.com
(eh, I didn't leave a comment yet? Late~ o.O)

Much more *blush*
And I totally agree with gokuma - whatever would Unohana say ^.^ Something suitably suttle, like "You have to be covered in order to recover?" *gets whacked for the bad pun*

on 2009-08-17 12:56 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com
Ahaha, why am I tempted to write a scene with Unohana coming in and seeing them? She'd be all *smiles serenely*

Lol @ your pun! xD

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